Long fragile branches blow in the wind, tall strands of grass lay flat to the earth. Everything is calm and quiet, a beautiful summers day is awaiting you. The sun is shining and the birds are chearping while all else lye silent and peaceful. The sound of laughter will soon be carried through the warming gusts of wind. The smells of the cold and salted ocean hover gently through the air, as the sound of the ocean waves crash aggresivly against the rocky shores. The sun has yet to rise and so the day has yet to begin its surprise. There are games to be played and fun to be had all in a summers day.
All is now awake and starting the days mysterious activities. Children run frantically through the unplowed meadows playing a game of tag. Couples walk the long shorelines of the ocean watching the beautiful scenery. Birds fly circles watching all of the activity going on far below, and the animals play games of hide and seek amung the tall trees and colorful flowers of the woods. The sun has hit its peak and has now begun to set. Once again the day is all quiet and peaceful until the sun rises agin the next morning to start all over again.
Kim, I really like this! It makes me nostalgic for childhood and summer. Although, you could have chosen better words. But you have good descriptions and it is a good portrayal of summer
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ReplyDeleteI thought this piece of writing was great because I've been thinking a lot about summer too. It was almost calming to me when you were reading it. At first, I didn't really understand where you were going with it, but it definitely got better as it continued!